1st Pass review

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Jesse
some type of pause(s) in first "rodeo"? break up timing better
look @ diminishing tosro flail motion
anticipation for stool launch
first reach - slow out more
check eye line - don't break 4th wall

Jesse Round 2
1st off balance pose - smoother entry into pose, more overlap in limbs.
Transition into Stool Grip pose - check trans and rot curves on root, smooth out more, avoid locking rotations.
Flip landing - tighten up timing.
Keep root curves subtlely alive during stool squat.

Jesse Round 3
First pose still floaty, esp. feet and hips. Diminish foot roll?
1st balarina pose - use arms more for balance. Left arm pose not working.

Taki
1st part - weight shift, break up motion,
break up arm twins, arms need motion.
1st part - shift hips back and forth, rotate on Y, let arms overlap a bit, etc.
Punch Anticip Pose - more "stretch" in/slow in, hold pose longer.
Punch End Pose - more linear/lower strike with arm, maybe add curve in spine to help
Punch needs to be faster + more snappier
Foot moves - pick up feet.

Taki Round 2
1st part - find figure 8 in root. Let that motion inform polish choices on upper body.
transition to first "fighting stance" - sharper, more direct, flourish, etc. Act it out. :)
Transition to "punch ready" pose - maybe a breakdown or two? Look @ "cat stance" on google?
general footwork cleanup on anticipation and punch.
Punch - no shake at first - stretch pose slightly, and then ease in fist shake.
Find nice arcs in the root movement.

Taki Round 3
Keep punch alive - stretch it! 123455666777788888999999999999999
Use whole body in punch stretch. Feel it out.
Clavicle higher on back hand during punch pose.
Fix knees on punch, find solid line of action.


Yalda-camera closer
1st position hold longer (3x?). Build up tension in eyes, face, then explode into first reaction pose.
Run swat pose - more guarded with close arm, more lean away in spine? Front foot, break up flat line. More thrust fwd in torso.



Rais
A little more anticipation + secondary @ beginning, loosen body/limbs.
Slow out from first pose more into run
Lose root translate pause on first run pose
Tag platform with hands on way up
Make climb faster (2x)
Slow out from standing, drop into squat quicker
Loosen Root translate/rotate during squat - too still.
Clean up flip - smoother
Landing - more weight, more limb overlap, more "bounce"

Rais Round 2
Loosed up anticipation @ beginning a bit
Root - ease out into run, esp. on Z trans
Left Foot/last step of run, rock back on heel for impact; @ frame 36, pull foot back just a bit
Root - Y trans before squat @ top - smooth out and spline/unify curve
speed up flip (2x ?)
work on landing - more overlap/too harsh

Rais Round 3
Bounces at start - begin slower, build up as it gets closer to dash
Smooth out rotation curves on root
Root curves in general - make more organic/no straight holds.
Top of block - foot L has pop.
More follow thru in landing, even in root.
Looked for "locked" keys and break them up. Only footsteps are totally still.