Blocking/Planning Feedback

Rais
- opening pose, more ready, more athletic
- 2nd pose needs to be more sprinty/show forward
force
- 4th pose - torso more "into" the rotation, keep the head up, more twist in arms, bends in elbows - foot roll on this position
- 5th pose - more lean back on squat
- 6th pose - landing - better line of action
- last pose - more athletic, like 1st

Paul
1st pose - fix weight, lessen spine curve, fix hands/loosed wrist pose, head more straight forward
2nd pose - weight more on back leg, more twist throughout whole body, find a good line of action - reverse "C" curve - start low, swing
high
3rd pose - broken into 2 - stick release (atheltic/clumsy) - opps, where's my stick pose?


Yalda -
1st pose- fix arms, head up/down?
2nd pose - more lean/directional intent
3rd pose - more direction intent
4th pose - more lean fwd, stretch out arms/pose
5th pose - heel back? break up twins on feet, try aligning fwd axis of char to one channel, think line of action

Jesse -
1st pose - body more "safe" and turned towards bulb/ less pinky bend, compensate by curling other fingers in more.
2nd pose - more reach "up", horizontal reach is unbalanced.
3rd pose (first stool spin) - keep model on balance and see how you can push the pose more
4th pose (crouch) - off balance, less curve in upper spine, feet out to side more (rot Y), rotate root more into pose
5th pose - lose hang on, more of a surprise
6th pose - needs to be different from other landing pose
Ballerina pose - body more fwd/down, we should be able to read his face
falling pose - needs spine curve reversal before hand. Push this pose more.

Tak-
1st Pose - a little ball roll, slight torso angle forward, subtle changes to arms/hands - see how you can "help" the pose/line of action more.
2nd pose - suggest front foot drag, keep front hand more up/guarded
3rd pose - needs to look more powerful/better line of action, weight on back leg, make pose stronger
4th - get character on balance, more twist/motion through whole pose/spine, look @ Akuma pose more, see what he is doing